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NiftyLit's avatar

I waited to see the release of your other works to compare things before commenting. From what I've read from you so far, this story is my favorite one. I like that it doesn't overplay the gay to straight element too much and what's there is expertly woven with erotic horror writing that makes it really engaging to read. This story reminding me of my two favorite orientation play stories also contribute to why I like it so much.

I hope there's more stories like this in the future. I’m looking forward to see what you come up with.

Jax Juven's avatar

Thanks for your feedback!

I totally agree that a more subtle gay to straight motif gives these stories more depth. That is something I am aiming at.

I hope you will enjoy the next story, "Reverse Gear." It has a similar approach.